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Marry Me by Meikokoro Marry Me by Meikokoro
YOU KNOW WHAT? FORGET IT. I GIVE UP ON FORESHORTENING.

//throws tablet
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I am curious about about your disenchantment with your drawing style.
I think the varied 'sketchy' black outlines in your work enhance the unique 'ragamuffin quaity of your character although aother colour choices or soft edged lines may also have worked well.
The character's shading provides enough dimension to contrast well against the subtle textures of the background.
I find the elongation and slightly awkward positioning of you figure gives her an appealing shyness, which is evocatively contrasted with the minimal feminine dress.
My only minor criticism is about the 'generic' expression on her face although I know from personal struggles how hard subtle expressions are.
I really do appreciate your work.
What do you think?
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BramblepathThePirate Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist
This is so amazing.
Why cant my simple scribbles look like this?
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-hugs you and your amazing skills-
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Meikokoro Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
WUTCHU TALKIN BOUT. I can't do half as well as your arts.
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BramblepathThePirate Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist
YES YOU CAN HJDSGKFKM<LNDGHLUFJGH<HNBR<HGHUVDEMNBF
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Meikokoro Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
NU, I'VE TRIED AND I JUST CAN'T oAo
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BramblepathThePirate Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist
LIAR.
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Meikokoro Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
NU. I AM A TRUTHER.
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Meikokoro Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
NU. I AM A TRUTHER.
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BramblepathThePirate Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist
NU.
NU YOU'RE STILL LYING HDSFJ
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Meikokoro Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
NU D:< I TELL THE TRUTHS
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JackTheMaverick Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The perspective and colors are pretty neat. This character has a nice design about her. Only real criticism I have is that she seems a bit too lanky, but aside from that, I like this!
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